Brief

poema de Alenvi

Brief

The edge of the forest
the cold of oblivion,
the moisture of a kiss,
the steam of the rain in summer,
the sea stuck in winter waves,
the fright of knowing seduction,
the shadow of an illusion,
the patience of a rusty nail,
the feet of an alien bed,
to be silent before stupidity,
the loyalty of a dagger,
the end of a book,
the afternoon of a Friday,
the muse on the empty table,
the pleasure invented
in front of the mirror,
the blow on the forehead
that gives away the memory,
the lack of style
of the greed destiny,
when we wield
the brevity of a moment.

Alfonso

Comentarios & Opiniones

Mac1965

Very nice "the brevity of a moment.". I liked your thinking. Have a nice night.

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Lorena Rioseco Palacios

Love your words and all the moment when i feel like a trip, all the stars , i want to read all of you !!!

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Alenvi

Thank you for your comments, I've never been exposed to other poets, I write mainly from where I live , Catskills mountain , N Y and what I feel... Happy to share them with you .. I expect a literally review, from all of you , thats encouragement!

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María del Rocío

Alenvi, your poetry, is beautiful, Im not sure you will get a literally review fair to the beauty of your verses. Most likely we will get the feeling that it leaves you with as a reader. As it does me. Also because of language. Loved it!

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Alenvi

I wouldl love to explain every verse in this poem, just as a clue, goes from childhood to adult hood and involves,what shape us as beings,moments, and they are brief!

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