I need your attention

poema de Rare

I'm standing in the pain
That's smothering me
It's more becoming my own blood
Why can't you see?
That I'm starving for your love
And I need attention
Or I'm gonna die.

Poeta: Rare | ES | Desde Oct/2016Rare

Comentarios & Opiniones

PoematrixAdmin

Hi Nicole! Thanks for writing. In a few months Poematrix will be for english language. Nice poem. Bye!

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rober

Well the first verses are not correct but I enjoy the effort.Well done

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